His monologue was interrupted by a howls. A real deep one first, then it was followed by others. At least two of them calling out in unison, like a canine doo wop group with no talent.
Lisa DeGale was a great person and of coarse the governing deity of this realm thought she spent too much time making this world somewhat livable, so Nathaniel supposed that is why she got the cancer.
Is anyone else still reminded of Full Life Consequences?
Don't take this the wrong way, but seriously, if this is your second draft
, you have no hope as a writer. I'm not saying this to be mean, you just have no talent for it at all.